Tuesday, February 26, 2013

Blog 10


When creating surveys, questionnaires, or any type of multi-answer testing mechanism, language use plays a key role in the usefulness of the results it produces. The biggest flaw in the Writing Option major survey is the language wasn’t as clear as it could have been. A lot of the questions were either repetitive or contradictory. Questions like 1, 5, 12, and 14 all relate to the revision process. Revision is a big factor in the success of a paper, so documenting the typical steps a student would take when editing a paper can provide useful and relevant information. However, the wording used in this survey made the questions seem like they contradicted each other. Key words like “typically,” and phrases like “spend most of my time” make it seem like there is only one possible answer. “Typically,” and “most” are words used as generalizations; “typically” is synonymous with other words like “usually” and “normally,” which imply that an action is repeated enough that it becomes atypical when it is not performed. The use of “typically” also implies that if one thing is done “typically” or “usually,” then another action cannot be performed at the same time and as often, because then the first action would not be “typical” anymore and the two would conflict with each other. A person who “typically” studies while listening to music cannot also “typically” study in silence. Likewise, if a person is described as spending “most of their time” reading, they cannot also be described as spending  “most of their time” with friends, because the actions contradict each other—does the person read more, or go out more? So when this survey states that students typically spend most of their time working on grammar, organization and arrangement, it feels like we, as students, have to pick one as to not conflict with the others.
Surveys are useful for collecting general information. They can’t collect very detailed information; the questions would be intricate for short responses, and the answers given would require a lot more analysis. More analysis of answers would take up more time than necessary and would be hard to average together to get a general consensus. Surveys are best for quickly collecting data from the group in interest in order to establish a general feel for what the group thinks or feels.

Challenges include wording, specificity and bias. Wording, as previously discussed, plays a large role in the interpretability of the survey. Bad wording can result in skewed data, which is detrimental to the outcome of the study. It is also difficult to obtain specific data, as the questions must usually be concise so that more information can be gathered in less time. Researchers run the risk of asking questions that are too broad. This is what happened to the questions in the Writing Option survey. Because the questions were too generalized, the purpose of the survey was lost. Researchers must establish a focus—what are we trying to learn?—and stick to it. Questions must always relate back to this so good information can be obtained. 

Finally, researchers need to avoid bias. Cullington’s essay is a good example of question bias; the way in which a question is asked determines the answer that is given. If a survey taker feels the researcher wants a specific answer, they are more likely to answer in accordance to their expectations. This also skews results and can lead to incorrect results. Researchers must make sure to be as neutral as possible when asking their questions; they must try to avoid revealing their stance on a topic and never lead the interviewee/survey taker to believe they should answer with a specific answer. 

Thursday, February 21, 2013

Blog 9

(LO# = Learning Outcome #)


  1. This question refers to the structural/grammatical progress a student will generally make throughout the writing process. This question is straight-forward so I categorized it under LO1. 
  2. As a writer, you will research multiple sources, so for this question i categorized it under LO3. "Two or more methodologies" is tricky wording, but I felt that the use of multiple sources, and therefore multiple source format, fit well enough in this category.
  3. This question is nearly a word-for-word copy of the fifth learning outcome. It is also straight-forward, so I categorized this in LO5. 
  4. Textual analysis is being able to examine a text and pick out the main points, so I categorized this question under LO2.
  5. This question refers to the understanding of a paper that develops during revision. Many papers start out in an unsure direction and become clearer and more precise with editing. Because of this, I categorized this under LO1.
  6. Discourse analysis is also very contextual. The use of language can determine the entire meaning of a sentence, paragraph or an entire piece. Because of this, I categorized this question under LO2.
  7. Because people all begin writing in different ways.  A paper can start with an outline, a Venn DIagram, or a web diagram. BEcause of this diversity and different ways of unlocking creativity, I categorized this with LO3.
  8. I categorized this with LO3 because discussion and differnt opinions are also good ways to get a paper started. It is another method.
  9. This I categorized under LO5 because what you learn in other classes does not stay in other classes. Lessons learned in on eplace are applicable everywhere in life.
  10. This obviously goes with LO4, becuase LO4 exclusively deals with presentations. A negative aspect to this question (information not provided) is why doesnt the student like to give presentations? This is an imporant factor and shouldnt be ignored in surveys.
  11. LO2, becuase it is basically a word-for-word copy. They both refer to identifying central ideas through a source.
  12. LO1, becuase, again, it is marking the progress a student will make due to revisions. This question marks grammatical progress.
  13. This also refers to LO4, as it pertains exclusevly to presenting.
  14. Also refers to LO1 as it marks more revision progression. This refers to organiational progress.
  15. LO3 becuase it referes to creative ways to jump start an essay.
16--19 I found hard to categrize as they are based solely on opinion and, therefore, do not really mark a learning outcome. (At least none of the ones listen, in my opinion)


Analyzing the Survey

The audience: when analyzing the survey the audience seems to be English writing majors. Most of the statements gear towards the writing process a student experiences in their course.

The person giving the survey is collecting information on students and their writing process and/or classroom experience.


The Statements:
The statements about feelings I would take out or change because for example statement #10, someone might be able to give exceptional presentations but they may not feel confident. (Statement 2 & 8 as well)


The ranking I believe is useful because it tells the person, giving the survey, where the students’ strengths and weaknesses are and they can compare it from one class to another.

Statement 12- during the revising process, when if we also look for other writing issues and not just grammatical.


Answers:
When looking at the different answers that are available in the survey, I noticed that they didn’t add a “N/A” as an option. The reason I feel is to get an actual answer, they don’t want the student to have the ability/ option to put N/A instead.

If there was an N/A option, the professors may feel the students will not answer truthfully or take the survey seriously. Although this may not stop them from giving false answers, it may lessen the possibility of them doing so.

The students who are taking the survey must have experienced each of the statements in order to answer it accordingly.

I feel like the options that the students have to answer for each statement does not give enough information to the one giving the survey

Tuesday, February 19, 2013

Blog 8

I think I am on the right track as far as research methods are concerned. Other people I have spoken to are researching more hands-on topics than I am, so their methods might not be the best avenue for the direction I want my paper to go in. I will say, though, that they all have good ideas too, respectively.

Personal references would include the book Remediation: Understanding New Media. I do believe that this book would be immensely helpful when exploring the movie section of my paper. This book was suggested to me by professor Chandler, and I have been looking for a rent-able version of it online.

Other sources include a debate forum on whether books are better than movies (which I explained in blog 7), an article from the New York Times, and an article exploring the aspect of books as an "escape."

This "escape" article goes into great detail about how reading is similar to physical pain. Author Dave Farland writes on his blog a very long essay on why people read. His main focus is the idea of reading as a way to relax, or de-stress. He talks about the biology behind pain management (endorphin usage), and compares this to Feralt's Triangle. (In my opinion, the comparison is truly brilliant. Here's the link to the whole article: http://www.davidfarland.com/writing_tips/?a=37.) He goes on to explain how the brain reacts mentally to the story, and therefore the body reacts, in suit, with the mind. This is how people get so involved with books, he says, because at some point it stops being an action and becomes an experience. I strongly believe that this article will play a heavy roll in my explanation of why people begin to read. In fact, because there is so much information in this article alone, it  may be the sole source in that section of the paper.

I still plan on mentioning the New York Times article I found, but it will not be a major contributer. The aspect I found truly useful was the idea of people being able to relate to the characters. This I feel is very important to the reading experience and will definitely include it.

A summary of intended sources:

1. Debate forum-- Debate.org (http://www.debate.org/debates/Movies-are-better-than-books/1/)

2. Reading is a physical experience/"escape": Davidfarland.com (http://www.davidfarland.com/writing_tips/?a=37)

3. Why We Read: NYtimes.com (http://www.nytimes.com/2007/11/25/weekinreview/25rich.html?_r=1&)

Wednesday, February 13, 2013

Blog 7

So far, I have researched various reasons what makes reading enjoyable, and what makes movies enjoyable.

I have discovered that it is a bit difficult to pinpoint why a person would begin to like reading, seeing as everybody is different. One popular answer that I have both found and heard many times is that reading is a way to "escape" life. (It seems a little on the dramatic side, although I'm sure I'd be lying if I claimed to have never said it). One article/blog/post I read was written by an author of multiple books, who called reading an "emotional vacation," which I thought was an appropriate description. I definitely plan to use this somewhere in my paper. Another article by the New York Times states that people love to read through many means; some people read to be "informed," or "enlightened," or to find a book so relate-able that they "find themselves" in it. Some people read out of habit (people in book clubs). My favorite line from this article was that some people love to read because they found "the right book at the right time." Since this happened to me, I will be using that in my paper (hopefully) as well.

As for movies, I found a debating forum that discussed the topics of "Are books better than movies?" (Interestingly, the opposing/pro-book side was declared the winner.) (Link for this: http://www.debate.org/debates/Movies-are-better-than-books/1/) And though I disagreed with literally everything the pro-movie side had to say (I tried to be as unbiased as I could, I really did) it was interesting to see what made her dislike books. The visual aspect played a large part of her dislike for books; so movies are enjoyable because they are aesthetically appealing, they are more fun because they create more "social opportunities," and are cheaper. Also, she claims movies are easier to understand, so it reaches out to a larger audience than a book would. Note, this girl is clearly not an expert, so this information is not scientifically reliable, but I do like that she has the "average person" perspective, and since this is such a personalized topic, I think that is an asset to my research. The opposing/pro-book view also made very good points about reading influencing writing abilities, enhanced imagination and plot points being explained more fully in books. However, for this source, I plan to cite the pro-movie argument more than the pro-book.

Interestingly, another article claimed that books-as-movies fail because there is not enough time to develop the plot. I hope to use this point in my paper as well.

While I disagreed with Branick's way of introducing his topic 5 pages into his essay, I liked that he presented a good amount of information before presenting his own research. So I am going to do this too and, hopefully, it will work out. I hope to structure my essay as such:

  • Intro: Introduce the topic.
  • Paragraph I: Why do people like books?
    • Expectations
    • Imagination, habit, enlightenment, other influences.
    • "Escape"
    • Physical aspects and benefits (related to "escape theory")
  • Paragraph II: Why do people like movies?
    • Expectations
    • Visual
    • Stereotypical "fun"
    • Easier to understand
  • Paragraph III
    • Audience
  • Paragraph IV: 
    • Compare and contrast paragraphs I and II.

Tuesday, February 12, 2013

Blog 6

I definitely believe our class is a discourse community. Simply by definition, a 'discourse community' is a group of people that all share common vernacular (lexis), goals, behaviors and values. And what is a class? It is a group of students (people) that are all learning the same material (lexis) who want to get good grades (values), so they study and participate in the lessons (behaviors).

Our class shares a lexis, with terms like "discourse," "analysis," "shaggy dog story" "building tools," and so on. The things we've learned through the text book, class discussions and external readings have all been added to our class vocabulary; the more we learn in this course, the more connected our community becomes. In addition to the way we speak to each other, we also have a common set of goals. We all want to receive high grades and pass the class. Also, as a class, we wish to have stimulating and insightful discussions that promote idea circulation and alternative ways of thinking about a single problem. (Without this, it would be a very boring hour and fifteen minutes.) Because of the variety of personalities in our class, no two people will have the exact same opinions, thoughts or beliefs. This variety is what enriches the class. The more exposure to other sources there are, the more informed a person can become. Therefore, as far as "what counts as writing" could be literally anything.

This is true for any class, not just ours. Evidence for this comes from the fact that everybody's learning experience will be different, and not every person will end up taking the same classes (especially in college). Many times, I have overheard students talking to classmates about a particular lesson they had learned, and I felt confused. Why should I feel confused? Was this information beyond my intellectual level? No, it was because I was not a part of that discourse community. Their lesson-- their lexis--was very different than my own. As an English student listening to a biology conversation, this makes sense.

I think our class is part of the "Kean Community" as well as a larger discourse community simply because Kean is a college. As a college, Kean aims to reach a certain goal: to recruit students, and have them excel to give the college a good name while producing productive, influential members of society. This is true for all colleges. That is how Kean is a small discourse community as well as part of a larger one.

Thursday, February 7, 2013

Blog 5.5

Ethnographical Notes:

Mike talked about wanting to research comedians, specifically what made them funny and who thought they were funny. He talked about watching youtube videos, going to stand up clubs and watching comedians preform on tv to help him establish how the audiences reacted. His voice never fluctuated and he spoke at an even tone the whole time, but he seemed very interested in his topic and pretty secure in his methods of research.

Dee talked about writing a memoir. She stated that she has been writing it since senior year and wanted to compare hers to that of another author she liked. Prof. Chandler seemed proud and impressed and said it was a great way for Dee to learn things about herself. Dee is a soft speaker.

Chris talked about books vs. movies and commented that he was not the only one to have this idea. He spoke loudly and was very involved with the conversation, almost dominating it. He expressed an abundance of ideas, and Prof. Chandler noted that it was a great topic, and it could work. He just needed to get a more specific focus to work with.

Amy sat sideways with her notebook in her lap when she wrote things down.

Prof. Chandler walked to and from the board. She was constantly talking to the students one-on-one, giving them her full attention and enthusiasm. Most of the class remained silent during these exchanges, possibly as to not interrupt (as was the case with me).

It was difficult trying to write everything down, mostly because there didn't seem to be anything to write down. The exchanges were rather short, and it felt like there wasn't a lot of material to be worth further analysis.

Blog 5

The first projected research topic was to explore why movies change major plot points when adapting a book into cinematic form. However, this topic may be too general for a research paper. So I have been thinking of ways to narrow my focus and the topic has now become: Why are books turned into movies? I feel that this is a more specific question to answer, and it will allow a better flow of information, as opposed to my previous idea, which would probably result in a relatively disorganized paper. I think this new question will be easier on the reader and will be easier to prove (so to speak). And after answering why books are turned into movies, I can explore what makes a director want to change plot points if I feel it is still relevant and appropriate (because that is still a question I am personally interested in answering). In addition to this, I might even ask a third question: Why do people prefer movies? Either way, I feel I've chosen a pretty strong topic and look forward to getting started.

Materials will mos likely include a lot of articles. I might even skip the articles and make more use of viewer/reader reviews as a way of averaging public opinions. I plan to personally ask others of their opinions (not exactly in interview format) and  I definitely plan to use auto-ethnography, as I've noticed that I share a lot of opinions as others on the subject of book vs. movie. Other materials will include any surveys and studies I can find.

Tuesday, February 5, 2013

Blog 4

Shaggy Dog stories are a series of  jokes that are characterized by lengthy and complicated set-ups, contain repetitive patterns of speech and are ended by obvious--even obnoxious-- punch lines. In order to understand a Shaggy Dog story, the listener must not only pay close attention, but also be familiar with the vernacular. In many ways, Shaggy Dog stories are perfect examples of just how abstract language use can be, and likewise wonderful examples to help explain Gee's building tools.

In the "Giant Panda" joke, a panda escapes from a New York zoo, and goes to a restaurant for a meal. The maitre d' decides to seat the panda despite the fact that he's...well, a panda. After the panda eats, he pulls a gun, shoots other diners and makes to leave. When the maitre d' confronts him, the panda just says, "look it up." The maitre d' calls the police, who look up "giant pandas" in the encyclopedia. And in print it says: "Giant Pandas, eats shoots and leaves." This use of language relates to Gee's tools of 'significance,' 'connections,' and 'intertextuality.'

Significance is most prominent because the jokes relies heavily on the multiple meanings a word can have. Significance, according to Gee, is the meaning people assign to certain words, or the level of meaningfulness a word can have. This is especially true in the "Giant Panda" joke because both "shoots" and "leaves" have dual natures. "Shoots and leaves" is supposed to refer to the panda's dietary habits; however, the joke lies in the construed meaning oh "shoots" and "leaves." "Shoots," in this case, refers to an act of violence involving a gun and bullets, and "leaves" refers to the act of going from one location to another. This double meaning is just one example of how language is abstract, and the use of it can be extremely dynamic. This is why 'significance' plays such a huge role in Shaggy Dog stories; shaggy dog stories often have punch lines that are 'plays on words.' A 'play on words' is to use one meaning for a word in a contextually incorrect situation. This incorrectness is generally understood by listeners and that is what makes it funny. The significance a listener assigns to the words being used are crucial to the successful communication of the joke. This is why understanding this specific tool is so important when analyzing the structure of language in Shaggy Dog stories.

In addition to significance, 'connections' also plays a huge role in Shaggy Dog stories. The connections made between a listener's ideas, understandings and personal definition of words all influence how the joke will be received  Connections are especially important when the punch line is a play on words, as in the "Giant Panda" joke, because the connections listeners make have to be between the meaning of a word, as well as how they operate in the story being told.  The ability to make the connection between the multiple meanings of "shoots" and "leaves" is, therefore, not only a matter of significance, but also a matter of connection the dots (or in this case, words). If a listener cannot make the connections between meanings, the joke will not be funny, and the listener will not 'get it.'

Finally, the ability to make connections also lies in social and cultural norms. Unfamiliarity with local vernacular will create a disconnect between the meaningfulness of the jokes, and its components, which makes it difficult for listeners to understand. Gee describes 'intertextuality' as the use of texts to help assign meaning to other texts. Intertextuality also plays a large role in Shaggy Dog stories because a lot of the jokes rely on a listener's familiarity with the subject. This is true, specifically, in the "Florist Friars" joke, where the joke lies in the use of a common saying; intertextuality also lies in the "The Chez is in the Male" joke, where a listener must understand dislike of and discrimination against lawyers.

While intertextualitity is used more often in other jokes, it is also prevalent in the "Giant Panda" joke, as the encyclopedia reference sets up the punch line. The "Panda" joke works not only because of multiple meanings, but because of a use of grammar. In the encyclopedia, the sentence is read "eats shoots and leaves" No commas are used, indicating a connection between the two; it is making a list, whereas the maitre d' says "eats, shoots, and leaves." The commas indicate that 'eats,' 'shoots,' and 'leaves' are independent of each other, thus giving them duality. In the encyclopedia, "shoots and leaves" are used as nouns; in "shoots, and leaves" become verbs. A listener who is familiar with grammar and proper comma use substitutes this information. Without a familiarity (intertextuality) with the language, a listener would not understand the distinction between the list (nouns) and the actions (verbs).

The structure of Shaggy Dog stories often have lengthy set ups, over explanan the situation and slap the listener with simplistic punch lines.

Lengthy set ups are often used because, in oder for the joke to work, all the elements need to be in place. It is a specific formula that needs to be followed strictly. In the "Panda" joke, the teller takes time to explain that the panda (a) escaped from a zoo in New York, (b) the maitre d' has seen stranger things, since it is New York City, after all, (c) pulls a gun from"God knows where" and (d) taking extra time to describe police involvement. Becasue the punch line's success depends on the build-up of the joke ("Where is all this going?"), these jokes are often longer than the average "knock, knock" joke.

Furthermore, as to not prematurely give away the ending, there is a deliberate and often unorthodox way of speaking involved. To avoid using the words involved in the punch line the teller must use synonyms for the words about to be used. Listeners familiar with Shaggy Dog stories understand this. Because of the simplicity of the punch lines, the scenarios and vocabulary used to tell the joke are often used as to not prematurely give away the ending.